Wednesday, March 19, 2014

Book Review: Masque of the Read Death by Bethany Griffin-- Less Poe, more Twilight

This book is basically Twilight wrapped up in a nice little Edgar Allen Poe package.

Allowing this book to share the same title as one of Poe's short stories seems almost criminal. This book was just not worthy of its source material. It's closer to Twilight than anything Poe would have created.

Masque of the Red Death is not a direct retelling of the short story of the same name by Edgar Allen Poe, but draws inspiration from the work. The story follows Araby Worth, the daughter of a successful and rich scientist. Araby lives in a steampunk-inspired world during a devastating plague that has wiped out most of the world's population, left the air dangerous to breathe, and keeps those still alive living in constant fear. Crippled by her past and seeking to forget, Araby spends most of her time with her vapid best friend at the Debauchery Club, getting drunk and high, in search of "oblivion".

Enter the love triangle. Araby is thrust into the underground world of rebellion in her city when she gets involved with Will and Elliott. She must now choose not only where her allegiance lies but how much and who she's willing to risk for these men.

I found that this book didn't have a lot of meat for such intriguing source material. The world seemed interesting and frightening, but the narration kept it vague and confusing. I didn't feel that the book lived up to it's own potential. The author was too caught up in the close to pointless love triangle reminiscent of Jacob-Bella-Edward.

As with so many YA novels these days, the love triangle is the dominant storyline. Will we ever get a break from this irritating cliche? The love triangle is made further ridiculous and unbelievable by the fact that the main character, Araby, is unbelievably unlikable. It's not that she's not deep or undeveloped. She's just irritating and mildly depressing. She wasn't strong or interesting enough to be the main character, let alone have the story told from her perspective.

Furthermore the author seems to have mistaken dark, Gothic, and painful sadness (some of Poe's trademarks in my opinion) for campy, contrived, and depressing storytelling. It is certainly a fine line, but Miss Griffin fell headlong onto the wrong side. She made a beautiful Poe tale into something juvenile and borderline ridiculous.

As far as the writing goes, I saw potential. The (very) few descriptions the author allowed us in this frustratingly vague novel were hauntingly beautiful. On top of that the scene structures were executed very well. Most of the scenes, if they were boring, at least ending on an action sequence, keeping you at least intrigued to find out what would happen next. However, as a whole, I found the writing to be incredibly rushed and clearly not thought out in the least. I found myself often confused and disconnected from the text.

On a good note, I do have to say that this book ended well. The last part of the book had interesting and exciting action sequences. Is it enough to make me want to read the sequel? We'll see I suppose.

Maybe I'm just sensitive, because Poe is one of my literary idols. Maybe I've finally lost it over all the cliche's in today's YA fiction. Either way I give this book 2/5 stars, for a poor execution to an interesting idea.

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Monday, March 10, 2014

Book Review: Stung by Bethany Wiggins-- DID THAT BITCH JUST STING ME?!

Hate bees? I know I do.

Well you better fucking stop that pretty much immediately. Turns out bees are a bit of an important part of our ecosystem. Who'd've thought?!

What happens when bees stop existing?

Well the apocalypse, no more animals or plants, the return of pirates (on land), zombie-like monsters, almost zero girls, lots of sewer living, and a super intense romance, to paraphrase.

So now that you're up to date, Stung by Bethany Wiggins is about young Fiona, who after recently waking up from a coma, discovers that the world she once knew has given way to a barren wasteland full of monsters and raiders. Her family is gone and she can't remember anything beyond her 13th birthday. She sets out into this new disturbing world in search of familiar faces and answers.

I bought this book around what I'm guessing was it's publication, which was last year. I mostly bought it for the cover (because lets be real here, that cover is GORGEOUS). It's been sitting on my shelf basically ever since.

I picked it up because I wanted a quick read and I've sort of been on an apocalyptic kick lately.

I think the only thing I regret is that I didn't read this book sooner.

The concept behind this story (the very real idea of bees going extinct and the repercussions of that on our world) and all the added subplots were incredibly imaginative and well thought out.

I found myself very drawn into this world, particularly due to Bethany Wiggins descriptive abilities. She has hit that very fine line between being descriptive without being OVER descriptive. The way she writes was beautifully realistic. When I reached a scene in the sewer I honestly believed I was in that nasty ass sewer. I gagged more than once.

The world building and her beautifully unique writing style are what truly sold me on this book. Add on to that the beautiful build up to the final reveal about the main character's past and you have a very beautifully written novel.

Fiona, the main character, however... almost ruined it for me.

I found her so unrealistic. Most of her character development (and there wasn't much honestly) felt accidental. I didn't even like her until the last handful of chapters. I found her annoying, vapid, and (as I said) incredibly unrealistic. She was definitely lacking in character.

Despite that, I did manage to enjoy this book. There were many quotable moments in Wiggins' writing. If you can get past a poorly developed main character and enjoy the beautiful writing style and the incredibly interesting world building you will definitely enjoy this book.

(On a side note, that epilogue was soooo amazingly done. Sweet. Simple. Perfect. It sent a shiver down my spine.)

I give this book 4/5 stars, mostly for my inability to give a shit about Fiona and her plight.

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Wednesday, March 5, 2014

Book Review: World After by Susan Ee-- Where's all the Rafe?!

Check out my review of the first book in the Penryn and the End of Days Series here!

It's the age old trope: The second book in a series brings a heart wrenching separation of the the main couple, causing many sad feels and much angst.

It's not a bad trope. I myself have used this trope in my own writing. It's useful and an excellent way to humanize a couple that might seem too good to be true and a means of stirring emotion in your reader.

But can I just say... Rafe was gone for SO LONG!

Like I get that it was necessary. Penryn needed to go out and be her bad ass self on her own for a while. But I missed Rafe. I was on edge the whole time he was gone, thinking, "He's coming back in the next chapter right? RIGHT?!"

I was a mess.

Which, honestly, is kind of awesome. Susan Ee had me feeling Penryn's emotions, she had me on edge and nervous and sad but still determined. Ms. Ee has a true talent for capturing her audience and RUINING them with all the feels.

World After, the sequel to the incredible Angelfall, was everything I hoped it would be. Engrossing, disturbing, heart-pitter-patter inducing. It was an amazing and worthy sequel to a book that I truly hold VERY close to my heart.

Rafe and Penryn's reunion... I teared up. I really did. It was so beautiful and heart breaking. The writing was... gorgeous.

The scenes in Alcatraz... I don't even have words. Some of the most terrifying writing I've ever read. So impressed with this book.

And as always the action scenes are spot on and honestly have me green with envy. I wish I could write action sequences and beautifully and realistically as Susan Ee.

The characters were strong. I loved getting glimpses of Paige's kidnapping. It made me sympathize so much more with an already sympathetic character. The mother was just as terrifying and awesome as in the last book. And Dee-Dum were just as hilarious.

If I have anything to say, it would be that I honestly didn't care for the first little bit of the book. The scenes with the rebellion were often slowly paced and boring. I had a hard time imagining what was being described and an even harder time caring. They just didn't feel as thought out as the rest of the book.

Anyway. Susan Ee, you're a life ruiner. PLEASE give me book three! I NEED TO KNOW!! I love you.

All around I'd have to say I loved it just as much as the first book. 4.5/5 stars.

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Series Review: The Divergent Trilogy by Veronica Roth-- Worth the frustration


So in honor of the movie (which hits theaters March 21! PREPARE FOR THE FEELS!), I thought I'd share my thoughts and a review of a series that I have a massive love/hate relationship with.

The Divergent Trilogy is a dystopian YA novel set in a future Chicago, where the residents have been separated into factions that correspond with jobs, personality types, and skills. There are Abnegation, the Selfless; Candor, the Honest; Amity, the Peaceful; and Dauntless, the Brave. The story follows Tris, a young Abnegation girl who must decide which faction she belongs in. She can continue living a lie and stay with her family, or she can leave.

That's the simplified version anyway. This series honestly has sooo many ins and outs and subplots and facets. It's really very well thought out and intriguing.

The first book, Divergent is probably my favorite of the set, primarily for the action. I whipped through the first one. I went into is uncertain. I have a large distrust for books that are super hyped up and this is a big favorite for many many people. But I was pleasantly surprised by how quickly I read it and enjoyed it.

I admit I found Tris, the main character, somewhat irritating at times. But the side characters definitely made up for her occasionally stupid choices and opinions. And despite the flaws in Tris characters for me, Veronica Roth's writing was so beautiful and interesting that I enjoyed it anyway.

The second book... Ugh. I just... I can't.

I despised it. I considered giving up on the series after finishing Insurgent. I was so frustrated. With the characters, with the plot, with Veronica Roth. I just hated it. Characters seemed to be introduced for the sole purpose of killing them off. It felt like a lot of cheap shots. It was almost like a poorly thrown together jumble of ideas. I found Tris far more irritating. The side characters were no longer worth it to me. Tobias (the main love interest) was kind of a jackass. I was just so FRUSTRATED.

One redeeming quality I have to say though, is the cliffhanger at the end was basically what made me pick up Allegiant. I probably wouldn't have if the cliffhanger hadn't made me curious.

Now for the last book. I know there is a lot of dissension over this book. Without giving too much away, there is a big, EMOTIONAL event at the end of the book that upset MANY people. On top of that many felt the books was a lot slower paced, they were frustrated with the change in the POV, and--from what I can tell--many many people found Allegiant to be their least favorite of the series.

For me, it's a pretty close second favorite. If it had had a little bit more action and better pacing I might have enjoyed it more than Divergent. But other than that I really enjoyed most of Veronica Roth's choices with this story, particularly everything she did with the ending.

I sobbed. I have not cried this hard over a fantasy/science fiction novel since Half Blood Prince. But I had to put Allegiant down more than once. I just couldn't control the feels, there were so many.

Tris was the strongest her character has been in the entire series. She was my absolute favorite throughout it. So much growth and strength and bravery. At the beginning of the series Veronica told us Tris was supposed to be selfless AND brave AND intelligent. But it wasn't until Allegiant that she really SHOWED us.

Everything about this ending was elegant and beautiful and emotional. It is a truly memorable and stirring ending. It makes all the frustration I felt throughout the second book so very worth it.

All around I'd have to give Divergent 4.5/5 stars; Insurgent 3/5 stars; and Allegiant 4/5 stars.

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