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Showing posts with label excerpt. Show all posts

Monday, August 26, 2013

PB&J: A Love Story

It's been a few days since my last entry. So I thought I'd share a little "fan fiction" I wrote about 8 months ago. I just love shoving in as many fucking adjectives as possible into one sentence, can't you tell?

And believe me, I'm aware of my unending cleverness.



    Tucking a long strand of strawberry colored hair behind her ear, Jelly tried her hardest to keep her eyes firmly directed at her book and not on the spectacle going on only a few yards away.
     P.B., her best friend and the hottest boy on campus, was having yet another heated fight with his on and off girlfriend, Honey.
     He’d caught her with her sticky hands all over Butter, a long time rival of his.
     Honey reached for P.B., attempting to use her gooey sweet charms to get out of this particular sticky situation.
     Stepping away from the golden haired beauty, P.B. walked away.
     When she realized he was heading her way, Jelly tucked her head back into her book, biting her cherry flavored lip nervously.
     “Romancing the Preserve?” came a voice.
     Peeking up over her novel, Jelly tried to smile up at P.B.
     “You’re too much of a romantic, J,” P.B. informed her.
     Jelly shrugged shyly as he took a seat beside her. “I cant help it,” she murmured softly. “Are you okay?” She glanced at Honey who was glaring at them and talking fiercely to her friends Maple and Syrup.
     P.B. rolled his eyes. “Who needs her anyway?” He said. His hand moved and covered hers gently, uniting them. “I’ll always have you at least.”
     Jelly’s cheeks darkened to a bright peach and she smiled sweetly. “Always,” she agreed.



Obviously, I ship P.B. and J. Though don't get me wrong, I love me a good honey and peanut butter sammich every now and then.

It's not my best work, but you can fuck right off if you don't love them.


I'm pretty sure you'll see a lot more of these lovesick condiments soon...


Love love love!

Sunday, August 4, 2013

NOT a love triangle

Well I don't have much to blog about today unfortunately. I got a new car this week. The local weeklong holiday in my town (UBIC, Uintah Basin in Celebration (it's a lame name for a decent event unfortunately)) happened.

Other than that, it's been a pretty good week for writing. I'm starting to think I might just reach the deadline I've set myself. That deadline being finish revisions by the end of the month.

WOOO!!

So I'll leave those of you that may or may not be watch with this passage I just finished working on from Grim's Soldiers:

Noah got up, but Harvey stopped him. “If you ever give me any reason not to trust you, I will end you,” Harvey told him. “I may not know January that well anymore, but I know enough. She’s lived in this town all her life. She’s family around here. So if you hurt her, I’ll hurt you." 
“Alright I can handle that,” Noah said, his voice almost good natured. “But I have a few things to add.” He stepped forward, staring right at Harvey, emitting danger from every pore. “If you ever give me any reason not to trust you, I will end you as well, faster and easier than you could have done to me.” He smiled slowly. “And January has become rather important to me recently. I do know her. Better than she knows probably. So if you ever hurt her, I will destroy you.”
Noah stepped past him, following January out into hallway. 
If they had been in fact vying for the position of alpha male as January had suggested, Harvey wondered if he’d just lost.

Pretty great, eh? I'm proud of it. I like the interaction between my two favorite male characters. But maybe that's just me. And no, this is not a conversation happening in the midst of a love triangle. I think we've had enough love triangles for a while, don't you?

Anyway, wish me luck. Hopefully I can finish a few more chapter of revisions and touch ups before work tomorrow.